the Waves
Empty inside I stand upon black shores,Watching foaming waves caress my feet,I raise my eyes only to find yours,While crying the tears my wounded heart bleed.Scarlett red leaving trails, engraving my...
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ouch ....so much pain and despair conveyed here, innerspirit ... painting a stark and hopeless scene .... succumbing to the pain ... very powerful writing .... hugs to you ...."For long you live and...
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so brutal and bleak and despairing... such darkness... although it makes for a very powerful read. So vivid and full of suffering...
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Very strong writing...but so dark...our turn to tell you not to give up...or give in...there is always hope...there is always tomorrow...Every new beginning comes from some other beginnings end...Why...
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A fantastic schene created in these words, haunting and distressing. Scarey even, reminds me of Jaws or something. Or a serial killer walking the beach. I don't know what you had in mind, but it is a...
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